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*drools* O.O that was sooo fucking hot!!! And Sakura watching was so funny! lol she's a closet yaoi fan!!!

very. very. hot.

congratulations! ^_^

That was very good. Next time, space your paragraphs a little better that why it easier to read. Look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care, and god bless.

Well, this was QUITE an interesting read. Sasuke worried about Naruto rejecting him? I like that twist ... almost thought it was going to be be a threesome for a moment there and was a little lost. Not having quotation marks by when people spoke was confusing but got over it. LOL!

Nice job .. keep it up!

oh that was totally awesome, for a first time writer that was extremely well written, though definately some spelling and grammar mistakes but it was understandable so it was all good :), the lemon was great too, u must have had great inspiration lol, hope you continue to write more stories, maybe even sequels to this one teehee :p

Oh that was good. Really good, I loved Naruto and Sakura's relationship and you made Sakura very enjoyable in this...I was very happy with how she handled the relationship and understood.

You have great character depth and explain their reactions perfectly but sometimes it gets a little too long and you explain just a bit to much *giggles* But that can be good to sometimes.

Loved the lemons, of course xD, there was only one part that kinda confused me but I guess I got over it hehehehe.

Great first fic ^_^ Hope you have more some day. Later!