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for The 'Million Dollar' Man

by brook13baby13

person Mikra
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*grins widely* This was great for a first chapter. Update soon :)
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting. I look forward to what will happen next.
person yani
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this is a great first chapter. It definitely left me wanting to read more and the good grammar is a huge plus in my books! I'll be eagerly awaiting the rest of this story.
person ringpop
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BAAAHAHAHAHAHHA this seems like a really good start!!!!! i cant w8 to read more of this!
person gaara89
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it so much i had to read it again!
person Alleya
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You got a review for me right here, write more now!
person kataru
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWW this is pretty interesting >_> pls. update soooon <_<
person Damp
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wrecking Older Brothers car: 245,014 (is this in yen, or $ ??)

Going to work: Boredom

The face of the boy whose sitting on your lap after saying “Shouldn't we get to know each other first?” : Priceless.

Nice going there Naruto!! I love that you made Sasuke crash Itachi's car!!

-Damp *What kind of car was it???*
person Mist
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story! I can't wait to see how Sasuke reacts to Naruto's sentence!!
I counted the reveiws!!!
There are twenty-two!! Meaning you better update!!!

-Mist *Counting this one, makes it twenty-three!!!*
person lokivsanubis
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, its interesting, what a great way for Sasuke and Naruto to meet one another. :P can't wait to read more.

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