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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It has potential at least for being short. I look forward to your next update.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep going...
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo Sasuke nervous, that's refreshing. ^^ So is he going to greet Naruto with a big kiss?
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For your first time you did a very good job! You gave a bit of background info but not too much to bore a person to tears, and I liked how Sasuke was a bit nervous but not overly done so. Fine job hun, I hope you continue this story.