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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far. Keep it up. The plotline is promising.
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update. I can't wait for more Naruto and Sasuke interaction. I loved the scene between Iruka and Sakura. Very intense. Tsunde is scary. Can't wait for the next.
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...I'm like, the world's WORST reviewer, but I'm gonna try leaving a review regardless. Because this first chapter has me intrigued ^_^ Sasuke's crazy, there's no doubt about that. (nods)
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool. This sounds neat.
Can't wait for next chappy!
=)
Can't wait for next chappy!
=)
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continue soon please this looks very interesting. i want to see who the one who can't remember is! should i be able to guess it? this will be very good i think. i like your writing style. your foreshadowing makes me exicited to see how this will turn out.
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, i like this!
really interesting..
i wanna see how this goes..
do continue, i'll be waiting! :)
really interesting..
i wanna see how this goes..
do continue, i'll be waiting! :)
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD I loved it, Sasuke obsesive compulsive behaviour was very well interpretated... (Well, in my agenda it was. the kid can be really freaky about Itachi)
And Naruto was so.... CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *squeals*
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Keep it up!
And Naruto was so.... CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *squeals*
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Keep it up!
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Great start! I hope that you will continue this soon! It sounds really good so far! ^^ keep up the good work!
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it so far, can't wait to read more