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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quick thing. This sentence: "He continued his menstruations until he could feel her getting close." I... I think you mean *ministrations*. "menstruation" is a woman's time of the month. so thats... not very sexy ^^; it just totally threw me off. I love this pairing through, awesome.
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THat was good. I read the one about Kakashi too. They were both good. Keep on writing.
Rox
Rox
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Those two look nice together.