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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HE TRIPPED TWICE,THE KLUTZ,SASUKES...NICE WHYS THAT? DOES HE HAVE A HIDDEN MOTIVE OR IS HE JUST BEING KIND FOR SOME ODD REASON?AND NEJIS KINDA CREAPY .CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to read more. Keep updating.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I liked it!!! XD it's more than interesting and I can't wait for the next chp!!! neji was obviously surprised at the way Sasuke was acting so I can't wait to see why Sasuke allowed Naruto to leave - could it be just because he did find Naruto's excuse believable? Anyway - I think it was a good start!
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice choice for a story. I like it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your vamp scenes are hot! Please continue.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please. That chapter was too short. Naruto sounds adorable. Can he sprout ears and a tail? Please update soon.
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it so far... can't wait to read more
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I love itttt!!! Hahaha. Where'd you get the term 'sharing tongues? Possibly from a book...? about...cats....? If not, just ignore me. Hahaha, but seriously! UPDATE` SOON!!!!!!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning! This story has *a lot* of potential! I hope you're going to update soon!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding? This is very interesting. I cant wait to see their relationship grow and see how things will progress.