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by Chishio0okami

schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh nooooo DX aaah! DAMN YOU!
I hate GaiLee! i hate it so muuuch! but i was curious <.<
and now....now...u made me think its hooot.... DAMN YOU!
TT^TT
you're a fucking awsome writer, did you know that?
that was so wrong xD but.... aah! TT^TT you just fucked up my world! are you happy? ...i hope you are... cuz i am xD I just found a new couple! w00t! ................... D<
person animekid
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa that was different. So uh....sex burned out his fever eh? heh

well it was a pretty good lemon and Aff.net needs more gailee....well lee lemons period! I hope you make more ficlets
person Anne
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:O

Uwahhh~ So hot! I ... don't know what to say really, except that this left me gasping for air.
WRITE MORE GAILEE PRONZ, WOMAN. THE WORLD DEMANDS IT.

Oh and the last line was brilliant! :D
I applaud you~
person person
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
<3 That was awesome. There isn't enough GaixLee around, and that was so sweet. Nice work. ^-^
person person
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. There isn't enough GaixLee around, and that was so sweet. Nice work. ^-^

(submitting this again because the first time glitched up or something.)
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
umm it was okay. i like it somewhat. i would have loved if i wasnt think that ones 14 and the other was 28.
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O O_O O_O I am both shocked and horrified at this pairing... yet I can't look away! O_O O_O O_O


All silliness aside, you've actually writen a very good story. The pairing... well lets say there is probably a reason why there aren't alot of these writen and personally I had to seriously debate to myself whither or not I was going to open this link and read. You have no idea. I'm so horrified by the very thought of these two together, its just, I don't know. I can't put it into words. Its more like I don't want to know, you know? Bleh!

But putting that aside, it really is not a bad story. I was able to even get past my anti-LeeGai and enjoy the damn thing! So consider yourself to have done a good job. ^^ Round of applause! Keep up the good work!

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