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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I wonder, along with the given NaruSaku sex, will we see any HinaKiba smut? Regardless, keep it coming.
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well... it got to happen sometimes. I am now converted not only to the SaxNa pairing, but also to the fact that fox-boy can be sexy! good job! and plz post soon.
skål!
skål!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well well, it seems you like ShikaTema....
Well, thanks for adressiong me, and the only small problem I had with the NaruSaku was Sakura was showing no interest in Naruto, you fixed that so I'm content! I'm about to read the next chapter, and I can't wait!
Well, thanks for adressiong me, and the only small problem I had with the NaruSaku was Sakura was showing no interest in Naruto, you fixed that so I'm content! I'm about to read the next chapter, and I can't wait!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is definiately enough NaruSaku to hold me off until the next chapter! Liked that added touch of rain, even if it was a little chliche! Naruto is too innocent sometimes......
Update soon please? Great story, and I can't wait for the smut!
Update soon please? Great story, and I can't wait for the smut!
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, I'm shaking with anticipation! Come on, come ooooooonnnnnnn! lol
Kiyasume
Kiyasume
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this story hope you keep it up.
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, but who is it that spoke to Sakura, it couldn't be Naruto, no chan...
Wish I could say more, but I really can't unless I want to have the possiblity to make you made, which would be to sya to add more naruSaku soon, but I won't.
Update as soon as possible please?
Wish I could say more, but I really can't unless I want to have the possiblity to make you made, which would be to sya to add more naruSaku soon, but I won't.
Update as soon as possible please?
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I'm a sucker for Saku/Naru. Please keep it going, I expect to see some good stuff soon!
Kiyasume
Kiyasume
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story, please update again. I want to read more
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, nice start! Hm, it might make it interesting to have Naruto go into a small depression for a while, but that's just my thoughts, so it doesn't really matter. I only found one mistake, and it's quite common, it's Jutsu not jitsu, just wanted to let you know.
Update soon!
Update soon!