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for Gardens of Rain

by Leowen

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schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ummm...I liked this story's progression all the way up to this chapter. Naruto's new attitude is too OOC and unnecessary to even be justified. It just seems like its a new plot device to drag the ending of the story even more.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i kinda cried at this chapter. i really feel for sakura since she has to watch the second man she loves become cold and silent. i kinda wanted her to slap him and just scream at him "i'm still here so knock it off or i'll kill you myself!" or somthing like that.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love/hate it, I really hope this doesn't end with naruto and sakura not being together, the sadness and depression of killing him is a good and yet very sad addition into this story, you do very well at writing this, I actually felt kinda depressed readin this, which seems to have been the point to this chapter you wanted your readers to feel naruto's pain and it worked, keep typing, don't let this story die, and don't drag on the emo version of naruto's character for too too long, I'd like to see Sakura help him out of it soon, it feels very awkward seeing a cold, numb naruto
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. If only things had gone like this in the manga... Anyway, keep it coming.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEE!!!! YAY!! Sasuke is finally dead! woot! What happens next?! I can't wait!
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! THE UCHIHA IS DEEEEEEEEAAAADDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!! FIINALLLY!!!!!!!!! If you can't see, I hate Sasuke, whereas I think his brother is awesome. Althought, this is going to have reprocussions on Naruto and Sakura's relationship, maybe......
Kyuubi's always been cool, even when he was evil, because he's just fucking awesome fox.
Joy to the world, the Uchiha is dead! YAY!
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hoo!! keep em cmoing I love fluff, and romance, loved the littel confession from sakura in the rain, it was done really well good job, *favs*
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho ho! Sasuke! Time to die! (Hopefully) You're a really good fluff/kiss scene writer, you know that? Better then me at least, but that's not saying much. So, Kyuu-kun is perverted? That'll be funny because Naruto's going to have to deal with that all his life.
Update soon please?
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh i love this story and i'm surprised Naruto is easy to tease. I know he's really a sweet heart but he better be better in the sack.
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Geez, you know how to make one hell of a cliffhanger! I love the way that Sakura and Naruto are together...it's totemo kawaii dayo! lol

I saw a couple of spelling corrections needing to be made....Itadakimas should have a 'u' at the end...it's silent, I know, so it's a fairly common mispelling. Also, Garra should be Gaara.


I'm loving how this story is progressing...will there be hot passionate Kyuu-Naruto/Innersaku-Sakura sex sometime soon? I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!


KiyaSenriNoYoko

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