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for Call Me When You're Sober

by Reyn

person Guesto-chan
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like where this story is going! I can't wait to see more chappies, so keep 'em coming. ^^

I'm a sucker for 'I'm In Denial' Sasukes and 'I'm Going To Rescue You Whether You Like It or Not!' Narutos!
person Allys
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I loved this when I read it in the drabble contest XD. I sucked so bad at that though, I don't think I got anybody right XD. They were all so good. This one is spectacular. My favourite line was “Not so ‘quick like ninja’ now, are you, bastard?” LMAO!! I loved that. I enjoyed the entire thing, liked the idea that Sasuke would need help to deal and only be able to reach out when zonked out of his mind. *Huggles u* Thanks sweetheart.
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. I like the point of view you're using, one of my personal favorites, and I like the resignated feel of the piece.

One thing I'm going to nit-pick about though. You might consider changing your description of "hn" from a word into simply a sound. "Hn," I don't believe, is defined as a word.

Hope to see more of this.
person Aice
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this Naruto POV type of approach in your story.
Wow... Sasuke is in denial. He'd wished that Naruto was wrong. XD
I bet Naruto knows that Sasuke loves him.
They will make really cute + funny couple.
Will there be smex?
person Feion Phylar
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Alot. ^_^ I felt that you really captured Naruto's inner voice pretty well. I dont know if this is a one shot or not but I'd like to see more.
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD! It was cute!!! You kinda gave me some inspiration for this new story I've been in the process of writing. I will be sure to mention you when I start this story! I would ask you for your permission but Sasuke just gets drunk in the story i'm starting so I didn't really steal this from you, right? It won't have any lines or chapters like yours! ^^ You should write more to this!!

Ja!

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