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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really good. What could be Naruto's problem, hmm. I look forward to your next update.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
;_; Naruto's not dying right!? I mean Kyubbi is just broken or something...aww now I'm worried. I hope he makes it to suna safely..-gasp- he's not going there to die is he?! that would so sad! *_* update soon please, I'm dying to see what happens next!
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot. You're doing well. You may want to tone it down on the exclamation points though. It made it seem like the entire conversation was either yelling or just 'way' to perky. Anyway, keep going. ^.^