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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool story can't wait for next chappy.
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I'm so glad for the update! I was wondering when they were going to get together outside of the professional world! Too bad that Sasuke missed Naruto in the shower at the gym. I would have been just as sad Sasuke! Hahaha! Please update soon!!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, i love it update please!i give it a 5/5
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!! this is really good!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
meh it wasn't too short. Good stuff keep it comin hun! later!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love this story!!!! Also, your Mr.Right story is one of my favorites. You are a fantastic writer. Keep up the good work!!!!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
surprise is right he got close fast only after 1 other meeting and hes already buying him clothes.
keep it up youve got fan
keep it up youve got fan
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Hot damn!" all right!
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Vivi:Ah! The peirecings! So smexy!! -turnes into Vivi flavored goo-
Venny: Wow, how did you know that she had a serious thing for percings? XD She started to squeal when she read about the tounge one, and asked to see mine. Agian, and again, and again.
Vivi: Cause I like it! It the kind Sasuke has! But his says 'sexy' on it. I want one!!! Tisn't fair!
Venny: She won't get one because she doesn't want to wait for the swelling to go down.
Vivi: Shudda up. Now, onto the actual story. review. thingy.
Venny: Naruto is acting sexy. I would SO do him.....more than usual.
Vivi: Ah, -swoons- Never thought Kiba could be so sexy without Shino!! But I must say, Suigetsu does a really good job too!
Venny: Poor Sasu-kun. Having to be in a thing with the missing link, also goes by the name cockaroach, forehead, ugly, and Sakura.
Vivi: Of course, Naru-chan's going to win! Shit, if it were me, and I had to choose between my own boyfriend, and that sexy beast. I would choose Naru-chan!!
Venny:....And this is another reason 'm happy 'm no your boyfriend.
Vivi: Ah, 'Tachi is gay too? Can he be gay with Kyuubi? O.O PLEASE?!!! Come oooonnn!! That's a hot pairing!
Venny: Anyways, I like your story so far!
Vivi: Me too!
Both: UPDATE SOON!!!
Venny: BUH-BYE!!
~Vivi & Venny
Venny: Wow, how did you know that she had a serious thing for percings? XD She started to squeal when she read about the tounge one, and asked to see mine. Agian, and again, and again.
Vivi: Cause I like it! It the kind Sasuke has! But his says 'sexy' on it. I want one!!! Tisn't fair!
Venny: She won't get one because she doesn't want to wait for the swelling to go down.
Vivi: Shudda up. Now, onto the actual story. review. thingy.
Venny: Naruto is acting sexy. I would SO do him.....more than usual.
Vivi: Ah, -swoons- Never thought Kiba could be so sexy without Shino!! But I must say, Suigetsu does a really good job too!
Venny: Poor Sasu-kun. Having to be in a thing with the missing link, also goes by the name cockaroach, forehead, ugly, and Sakura.
Vivi: Of course, Naru-chan's going to win! Shit, if it were me, and I had to choose between my own boyfriend, and that sexy beast. I would choose Naru-chan!!
Venny:....And this is another reason 'm happy 'm no your boyfriend.
Vivi: Ah, 'Tachi is gay too? Can he be gay with Kyuubi? O.O PLEASE?!!! Come oooonnn!! That's a hot pairing!
Venny: Anyways, I like your story so far!
Vivi: Me too!
Both: UPDATE SOON!!!
Venny: BUH-BYE!!
~Vivi & Venny
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just as hot as the first cant wait for the thrid