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for Riding the Elevator

by Adi

schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS AND THE TUBE ONE :D
i really like your stories, i just mega squeed like a crazy person when i found it again, (im creating a reccomeneded reading list and i needed this to and a few others of yours to go on it :D)
i think youshould to a whole series or riding the's ... riding the ferris wheel? riding the ...? hmm the ferris wheel is all i got sadley lmfao, og well.
love this story and your writing,
write more
love love
person hsbs
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the second time I've read this. Last time I couldnt post a review, so here 'tis:

This hurts my heart! :sobs: poor tortured Sasuke. He really is mental! oops, I mean emotionally scarred.

And isnt he lucky to have Naruto as THE MOST understanding boyfriend EVER! I know I couldnt put up with that sort of roller coaster relationship. Probably why I dont have a boyfriend! Hn!
person hsbs
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Adi, you are evil! And thats all I have to say about that!
person bells
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My goodness, i adore your NaruSasus, especially this one- the Tube and the Elevator fictions.

You make their relationship very real, not just happy-horny-go-lucky kiss and make up sorta stuff. They talk, they communicate, and they love. It's about complementing each other, and how they complete each other. I'm so happy that i can find this sorta 'feeling' in your fictions. ^^

Could you write more sequels or something? :( Could you, could you? *grins* I know authors have their academic and socials lives, haha. So take your time! I'll be waiting and looking forward to more of your fictions to come. :)
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. Great work.

I tryed use the link you left for the fanarts but they are not working do you think that you can email me a better link to them or send me a copy through email. email: AngelicChaos81@yahoo.com
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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OMG! you made me cry...This One-shot was amazing
thanks for sharing!
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just can't believe how you succeed in putting up these great endings. And how you manage to keep our favourite boys in character so much. I can never do that *pout*
Anyways, I like how this one came out. *smiles*
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow...I love the way you created the atmosfeer in your fiction. It was such a beautiful one shot to read, definitely one of the best I've ever read. I could basically just feel the emotion of Sasuke's last words, ' Never me' . I absolutely loved it!
person k_citrus
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the ending is quite sad u know... naruto couldn't make the promise and stuff. It is very moving though. ^^
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*panic ensues* Please tell me you're writing something more after this!!

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