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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
From what I can see your grammar and spelling aren't that bad I only saw two misspelled words and it was the same word LOL. Good story I have been waiting for you to update. I really like your writing style. But damn now I want some marshmallows!
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story! can't wait to find out what naruto will do when he wakes up!!! I hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i haven't been able to read your story for a while so i was glad that you had updated when i was looking. i like that sasuke is ot going to be totally in control of naruto but only because he might lose some of the stuff that makes him naruto. i really love this story and can't wait to see who they send as the search party. i hoping for neiji, sakura, kakashi, kiba, and iruka, with a 50/50 on jiriayai. i can't wait til the next update.
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks like you got a pretty good story there. I have enjoyed it so far and look forward to more.
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a short chapter but it was truly sweet. I really enjoyed it. I was worried about Naruto for a second there till Sasuke figured out what to do. I really can't wait to see how Naruto will react when he realizes what Sasuke has done.
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was unexpected. Can't wait to see what Sasuke's backup plan is. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very exciting I hope you make more.
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P.S: Thanks for that saying of my first one-shot. I was just about to cancle my account but thanks to you, I feel alot better and will still do my best.
so, thanks again.
Alright?
P.S: Thanks for that saying of my first one-shot. I was just about to cancle my account but thanks to you, I feel alot better and will still do my best.
so, thanks again.
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do love this fic; I sometimes catch myself rereading chapters (no this isn't a sad attempt to get you to update I just like to read it). Thanks for your second review on 'Sex and Candy', I'm glad you like enough to reread it.
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December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the story so far....*pouts cutely* please update soon...*hands out naruto shaped cookies*
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December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!