rate_review Reviews

Welcome to the site. This was your first time writing yaoi?! I certainly couldn't tell. It was very beautiful fic! Self-abusive Sasuke is hot. Especially when it illicits steamy sex!! ^,^ Hope to see more fics by you because this one was sooooo wonderful!

Wonderful story!! I loved this! :)

Wow! Excellent story. I think you did a good job of really pulling the characters together, especially since it was a one shot. The smut was well written, and neither too draw out, or too short. I hope to see more of your writing soon. (Sorry for being such a stickler, but I think the title should be "Losing to My Demons" not "Loosing to My Demons" because loosing is the "ing" form of loose, or untightened, and losing is the "ing" form of "lose" or to fail. And if you meant to put loosing, please ignore me, but I wanted to let you know just in case it was a misspelling.) Good luck with the rest of your writing! ~ Jelp