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SQUEEEE!!!!!! *dies of nosebleed* @.o


THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL

*luffs* ^.^

Wow, this piece was so incredibly hot! Just Itachi's whole acting about Sasuke is great. And the part when he bought all the 1000 copies surprised me, I think it's very well done! On one hand, the story is pretty wild, but on the other hand also sweet and caring. I love it, you did a great job <3

ALRIGHT? Now I know you're being modest that was not frigging ALRIGHT! OMG that was the single most erotic thing I've ever read. At first I had my doubts...Naruto wasn't quite working out for me in the beginning but once the first scene was done, I was hooked! I hate dirty talking, it sounds ridiculous to me but with Itachi...that was so sexy. Your intimate scenes are mouth watering, mind blowing, so...I'm such a pervert but you can't blame me. You KNOW it was good. And it didn't feel like a PWP, I love that you added a plot and I think it's realistic enough and the whole porn idea...have yet to see it. I usually--again--hate AU for Animes but this one...this one was a gem, this one was perfect in every way. And it was lonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggg! I loved it so much. Please tell me you have more Naruto fics. I didn't get a cheesy feel out of this although some of those scenes, some writers--including myself--could've easily cheesed that thing up like a cheeto but you were amazing about that and those scenes were just touching. The whole plot was incredible but it's those intimate scene... they have me reeling.

Thank you

oh man, there was so much glorious itasasu sex in there....i need a cigarette. mmm, i loved this fic.

Damn that was the hottest itasasu I read!!!!
I was confused at first when I read the summary, I was like" how can it be itasasu and not be uchihacest???"o.O, But now I'm happy I read that!!!!
Your writing is very good and I wouldn't mind reading more of your "not" uchihacest!!!
Keep it up
Your slave forever!!!! LOL

That was so beautiful! Really, the smut was great, but I like the story the best. I've never read something like this about ItaSasu, and you captured the insecure emotions of Sasuke so well. Sasuke was all worried and Itachi liked him from the very beginning. Sweet and beautiful!

Hot damn, if that wasn't one of the best yaoi fics I've ever read. And I'm like Kakashi, so I should know. ^_~

Normally I don't like AU stories or even slightly OOCness, but I loved both Itachi and Sasuke in this. They were both believable and had their own appeal, seperate from how they're seen in the series. I also liked Naruto and Gaara, though Naruto never failed to make me grin in this one.

Really, your writing in amazing. Not once did I lose interest or have my mind wander; I was completely absorbed in the story.

-dies from bloodloss-

Niiro's ghost: Man!! That was awesome!!! I don't think I've read anything as unique and HOT as this!!! Uchihacest which really isn't uchihacest? Improbable!! Non-uchihacest that was mind-blowingly hot? Impossible!! Yet you did it!!!

OMGoodness I lurve you!! -glomps-

This was the best non-uchihacest, itaSasu fic I've ever read! Ur awesome! Ur work's awesome!!! -squeals like fangirl- I lurved it all!!!!!!!!!

You are the sex tenchi for The uchihas are you not?!Gawd, I just, runs off, comes back sweaty.You my flava!I get off on this odd pairing, them not being related, it works really well.All healthy and shiney.Morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre!

That was great! Very hot! Brothers or not they make such a hot couple.