rate_review Reviews

Awesome story. I really like this one. Not a pairing that you usually find, but really good.

I love you. And I love this fic. Your style is infinately readable and wholly realistic. The phrase "Doubly stupid bastard." cracked me up for some reason. The only thing I would change (and it's so very minor) is your repeated use of phrases like 'little swordsman' in place of the character's name. It's something that I get stuck in too. Try throwing out a wider variety of these or structuring your sentences so that it's not nessasary to state who is doing what again.