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I want to do one with hinata and temari. Jiraiya needs some insperation so he sneaks into a private hotsping. not realizing this was property of the hyuga main house he gets an eye full temari and hinata having sex. (maybe after a whle he's invited to join.)

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Two things:

I thought I would bring this up before I get an email from you regarding the matter. I have noticed that someone has submitted a similar story idea to the one I put in. I personally don't have a problem with this. We're two different authors with vastly different styles and pairings. If anything - I am curious as to what the other author will come up with...
Besides, this is supposed to be fun!

Also, I have no problems being the first cab off the rank as it were in terms of story submission and posting.

Okay - that's it. I'm going back to my hole in the wall now. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

katsuyo

wow i'm sorry i didn't know there was some one with the same idea i'm sorry but as you said different styles of writing ... well i can re vamp also..

jirai hits on hinata at a resturaunt but is rejected. later Jiraiya is walking through the training grounds looking for naruto but he instead comes across the two hyuga's during a moment of intamacy. he then realizes why he was shot down. Hinata and neji somehow miss his presence but then about a month later when the icha icha vol 92 mauscript is mailed to neji as a preview. both hyuga's aleep with jiraiya to get him to remove that part.

is that better?