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for What I Haven't Told You

by kati

person Lily
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was looking everywere for this story. I loved the story then my computer crased and i forgot the title. Please if you get the chance keep updating both What Your Worth and What I Haven't Told you. Thank you!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i likie *gives out narusasu brownies*
person Zara
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue! I like where this is going :")
person Noa
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! continue! I love how the story is going!!
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update, this is a good start!
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is kinda cute. im looking foward to seeing more.
person noa
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I lovee your story! Please continue! *puppydog eyes* :"))
person Arcueido
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, will try to be a little gentle here. The plot line and story concept is intriguing with Naruto having a twin. I would love to see more development on this. But I would also like to see a little less confusion between the points of views and the chapters lengthened slightly with more depth to each element. At the moment I have slight trouble picturing things properly. However, the idea is really good and I have yet to see anyone attempt a Naruto twin story (maybe I haven't browsed enough). So cheers for dreaming that one up.

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