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the ramen song is hilarious. the things that authors use for inspiration always astound me. cute chapter and i can't wait for the next one.

Poor Naruto always having accidents! I love the humor and the romance! :)

aww fluffies.

Cool chapter. Please continue!!!

Your story has come along greatly! I'm deeply impressed! ^_^ Stupid Sasuke, didn't Naruto had like all his supplies in those scrolls? What about clothes? Oh! Maybe Sasuke just wants to see Naruto shirtless..haha..

oh, by the way! Naruchan might have me be her beta! I'm like over flowing with happiness! Haha, thought maybe you'd like to know that...random, but hopefully it'll come true...

This is a very interesting way to handle getting Naruto pregnant and exploring the whole starting a relationship thing you've got going with our boys. I'm very interested to see how that plays out and looking forward to possessive/protective Sasuke if you choose to go that route. Just pretty please don't make Naruto wimpy. I'm really interested in seeing how they are going to handle the Kyuubi baby...they already know that one of these kids is going to be the Kyuubi if not just heavily influenced by it but the boys don't seem to be thinking that about that.

thanks for answering my questions in chapter 11. you pointed out the loopoles but i am still wondering how the laws got passed without the hokages consent. i like how you showed naruto's outlook and the way he sees is position in the village. it was hopeful and hopeless all wrapped up into one and i love you for it. i guess sasuke and naruto are going to have some outrageous times being travelling parents. especially with naruto being so clumsy and sasuke being so overprotective. it would be nice to see sasuke blow his top over naruto and show his jealous possesive side before they have sex. i always believe that competition is the best way to a stable smexy relationship. since they are traveling i guess it would be to much to have gaara run into them while out doing suna business in another counntry or something. or how about someone else that naruto helped out previously like they could visit where the bridge builder lives and have a chance to see inari all grown up (even though he's younger then them it's only like four or five years). maybe he could call sasuke old man or something (i don't know). anyway thanks for the update.

Yay
update!
That was an extremely sweet chapter. You are giving more depth to both Naruto and Sasuke, especially in explaining the unwritten laws in naruto's perspective. Cant wait for more. =D
~Schy~

*blushes* Um...This might be a little perverted of me,but...is there going to be a lemon? Oh, and Who in the HELL did Natuto sleep with? O.O It wasn't Jairyria was it!?! Ewwwww, that's a bad mental image! Update soon! I need these questions answered before they eat me alive! PLEASE!

yay i'm so waiting for the next chapter hehe it better be good lol