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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, such complete utter fluffy random.
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
Keep up the good work!
~Angel
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
Nice beginning. Love the third paragraph. . . . Interesting twist there. About why Sasuke’s on probation. It’s just a slight difference from the manga. Just goes to show what one little twist of Fate can do (you listening, Neji?). ^_^ . . . I wonder if you should’ve done that, Sasuke. So far, in that Keystone world, you’ve done just that, and you didn’t have to put up with this. Not yet, anyway. . . . Oh boy, Sasuke’s up to something. . . . I wonder if men -- straight men, I mean -- ever use those oils. . . . Mmm, hot language. . . . Oh, he’s got a little hair-kink, does he? . . . Hee hee, “Did he just almost knowingly drown himself?” XD . . . Aww, poor Sasuke, he’s scared. . . . (*snort*) “It didn’t answer, but he didn’t expect it to.” XDD . . . Wow, that’s a weird image, Naruto reading with glasses. Just -- weird. The book’s a nice touch to the story, though. . . . The dialogue is excellent. Very natural. . . . Whoa, that was cool, Naruto’s voice trailing off and “Sasuke’s eyes snapped open, the rest of what Naruto said [. . .]” Excellent. . . . Heh. You didn’t say anything, but it still got out, Sasuke. It was bound to happen. . . . Wow, this is awesome. Beautiful. . . . Heheheh, that’s clever. “But it also goes a long way in explaining why you’re so enthusiastic when [. . .]” ^^ . . . HAHAHA! “When a yawn seized his jaw.” I haven’t heard that one before! I gotta remember that line! ^_^
You BET I liked it! It’s on my list! Very original! ^_^
Nice beginning. Love the third paragraph. . . . Interesting twist there. About why Sasuke’s on probation. It’s just a slight difference from the manga. Just goes to show what one little twist of Fate can do (you listening, Neji?). ^_^ . . . I wonder if you should’ve done that, Sasuke. So far, in that Keystone world, you’ve done just that, and you didn’t have to put up with this. Not yet, anyway. . . . Oh boy, Sasuke’s up to something. . . . I wonder if men -- straight men, I mean -- ever use those oils. . . . Mmm, hot language. . . . Oh, he’s got a little hair-kink, does he? . . . Hee hee, “Did he just almost knowingly drown himself?” XD . . . Aww, poor Sasuke, he’s scared. . . . (*snort*) “It didn’t answer, but he didn’t expect it to.” XDD . . . Wow, that’s a weird image, Naruto reading with glasses. Just -- weird. The book’s a nice touch to the story, though. . . . The dialogue is excellent. Very natural. . . . Whoa, that was cool, Naruto’s voice trailing off and “Sasuke’s eyes snapped open, the rest of what Naruto said [. . .]” Excellent. . . . Heh. You didn’t say anything, but it still got out, Sasuke. It was bound to happen. . . . Wow, this is awesome. Beautiful. . . . Heheheh, that’s clever. “But it also goes a long way in explaining why you’re so enthusiastic when [. . .]” ^^ . . . HAHAHA! “When a yawn seized his jaw.” I haven’t heard that one before! I gotta remember that line! ^_^
You BET I liked it! It’s on my list! Very original! ^_^
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was certainly new and interesting! xD
I LOVED IT! *___*
I'd never thought about that...Sasuke having that kind of kink... But omg! This was cute, funny and of course hot! Not to mention very creative! *3*
I especially loved Naruto's little remark on Sasuke's enthusiasm. And the part with Sasuke almost drowning himself xD
Also, I was nervous about a meeting when I read this, and it truly worked as 'hairapy' xD I'm so adding this to my recs! <3
I LOVED IT! *___*
I'd never thought about that...Sasuke having that kind of kink... But omg! This was cute, funny and of course hot! Not to mention very creative! *3*
I especially loved Naruto's little remark on Sasuke's enthusiasm. And the part with Sasuke almost drowning himself xD
Also, I was nervous about a meeting when I read this, and it truly worked as 'hairapy' xD I'm so adding this to my recs! <3
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August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lmfao! I never woulda thought! This was a great story! Did you think about writing more on it? It's be PWP probably but still enjoyable nonetheless! I love NaruSasu stories but no one ever writes them. But this was a brilliantly written piece of work!
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was awesome, yet also very funny. I can actually picture that all in my head, and it's a very lovely picture.
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Sasuke is like my twin in this fanfic! I love people playing with my hair too!! *huggles Sasuke and plays with his hair*
HEHE! This was a great fanfic! Sasuke was so cute and Naruto was oh so a tease ^__^
I'm a great fan of your works, so I look forwards to more of your fanfics!
HEHE! This was a great fanfic! Sasuke was so cute and Naruto was oh so a tease ^__^
I'm a great fan of your works, so I look forwards to more of your fanfics!
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmm...hair play...**loves** Incredibly hot and well written!! Codos to you!!
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really good i liked it.
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Definitely hott! I really like your writing style. PLease write more stories :P
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was good. I love seeing Sasuke with all these weird little kinks.