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LOL! naruto as master is so intresting...and hot! keep up the good work.

I definitely like the story! NaruKaka (order matters!) is a pretty rare pairing. I would, however, recommend running the chapters through spell-check or having someone proofread before you post. If that's not possible, please don't comment about the errors *in* the story itself! It breaks the flow of your (very enjoyable) writing, and most of the time the word you mentioned was actually spelled *correctly* anyways. ^^ Trust your skillz, k?

... please get a beta, the story shows promise... but the spelling and grammatical errors kept pulling me out of the story making it hard to enjoy.

Yeah! I'm working on it I should have it up by this week end at least... About the pairings... I've disided to add more to it. I'm gonna juat do random pairings and you guys can tell me if I should continue them. Its mainly just what I feel like writing at the time... I'll also do rare or unheard of pairings just cus I want to come back and read them... I'll try to add a poll on the pairrings... If this site has one and if I can figure it out

I love this story and hope you are going to update soon. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Heh, Okay I know this will sound stupid from the POV of other reveiwers but let me explain frist. I like to leave my storys until I forget them then come back and reread them so I can read them in others POV... I have to say the first draft is better