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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I feel like this could be good if it didn't focus so much on your OC. I always try to give OC fics a chance, because I am an OC writer myself. You've got to be really careful with your OCs, because people will call them Marysues over anything. It's supposed to be an ItachixOC fic, so try to work him in more, but other than that, it's pretty good.