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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh and i forgot to say great second chapter and first lemon. always enjoy a good naruto/sakura lemon. can you give a list of who will be involved with naruto before you are done? plus gives me some sort of idea of how long this story is going to be.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure its sannin or at least sennin with 2 n's... watever though i might be wrong... you show promise so i volunteer to be your beta if you ever need one
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YATTA! time for the blonde mack daddy kick (or rather fuck XD) some ass
awesome stuff in every way, you win!
awesome stuff in every way, you win!
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why don't make this a Naruharem with Hinata as the Alpha Female.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, the perverts rise lol
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, one of the best stories I've read so far
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright Ayame then ANko Mitarashi, Kurenai I think it's her last name Yuuhi,
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, its good to see a (somewhat) good natured and slightly pervy (straight) Sasuke for a change.
Also, I just gotta say, while Naruto is like a kid at christmas with a new toy, his lack of common sense is really going to bite him on the ass with Ayame. Everyone knows, you don't shit where you eat. Yeah, she might not have any ties to the people he knows, but if he gets on the bad side of old man Teuchi... no more Ramen! Then death! (From starvation from lack of ramen.) >:) Bwahahahahahaa!
Also, I just gotta say, while Naruto is like a kid at christmas with a new toy, his lack of common sense is really going to bite him on the ass with Ayame. Everyone knows, you don't shit where you eat. Yeah, she might not have any ties to the people he knows, but if he gets on the bad side of old man Teuchi... no more Ramen! Then death! (From starvation from lack of ramen.) >:) Bwahahahahahaa!
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
those chapters were great sorry that my name is long its been my screnename for a copule of years and i type it quickly so i forget that it is inconvent for others to write it.
if you want when, or if, you respond to this you could call me W-G-ssj4 unless someone else comes up with that user name.
I can't wait for hinata to come in. I have a funny feeling that the jutse actual won't affect her at all because, well she's hinata
if you want when, or if, you respond to this you could call me W-G-ssj4 unless someone else comes up with that user name.
I can't wait for hinata to come in. I have a funny feeling that the jutse actual won't affect her at all because, well she's hinata
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well i most certainly think so and i have yet to find a Naruto/Hinata Lemon i don't like but also are you going to include Yugito (she is the 2 tailed Jinchuriki (i spelled that wrong didn't i) from cloud) in the story and i am also wondering if the age extention on this from young to old.