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Please update begging you

Yeah, I was wondering when Itachi was going to do something. Very hott!

yum.. that was goood

oh my goodness. my mouth is so dry after reading chapter 1. wow. super hot. i need to read ch2 now! cant think of anything else to say. my brain may have temporarily stopped functioning

Holy fucking shit! That has got to be one of the HOTTEST things I have ever read!
PLEASE post more soon!

Wow. That was really hot.

xDDD

Update soon, can't wait for the next part! =3

Oh, and there's another thing, I forgot to say it in my last review. *was too distracted by the hotness haha*

I really liked the scene where Naruto was almost about to quit. I think your writing of that really showed that Naruto and Sasuke are *that* close, but their relationship is kinda weird like that, so they may not realize it. Sasuke really does have a hard time expressing his feelings. I was like "Poor Sasuke and Naruto.." when I read that, but thank goodness Naruto didn't really quit.

Oh, and the part where Sasuke's a bastard when Itachi's not there is really cute, I can totally see that! *remembers when in the manga Sasuke was always asking Itachi to train him*

Um okay, that's all I can think of right now. ^^;; Again, I hope you update soon when you have the time! ... And sorry for the double reviews.

(cheers) I /so/ want a follow up. Very very good job, my friend. I /heart/ slutty!Sasuke. XD Can't wait till the next chapter!!

OMG!!!! I really love it!! I hope there'll be a part too, please update more!

O_O;...wow...I have nothing to say....you have pushed to speechlessness XD..MORE!!!