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for Full Circle

by vanessaclarke

person nyge98
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't give up yet. I'm so enjoying this story. I laughed so hard when Sasuke called the cops on Sai. That was funny.
person Meikyuu
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you sooooo much for sticking to this story, dagget! i've been following this work from the initial post of chapter one, and I adore it. It ranks in my recent list of faves. Admittedly, I'm worried how the whole thing with Sai will pan out, but you've made Naruto such a smart boy that I'm beginning to feel like everything will work out in the end. I definitely will stick to the story and I eagerly await its conclusion! Thank you for allowing me to do so.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY 3 chapters in a row update!! *gives cookie* I am soooo happy that Sasuke is finally opening up and becoming more aware of his feelings! If only he did steal a kiss or something in the last chapter *sigh* though I am sure he will be soon enough!! I still wonder how Naruto feels about Sasuke because we all know how the other feels about Naruto. Always so many questions! I still think I'm in a massive update rush right now hahaha! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss chapter 14?! Anyway, thought I would review this one before heading of to chapter 15. YAY! Double the fun.
I am adoring watching Sasuke 'wake up' to his attraction to Naruto. And when he thinks to himself how he has become quite the perv... god, that was priceless.
Of course, I hate that feeling when something is hanging over paradise... like a big ol'Sai cloud of disaster. WAH! Maybe he'll get hit by a bus and Naruto will never have to know that Sasuke was such an ass as to pay someone to take Naruto off his hands. Okay, I know that will never happen... I'm been told suspence, angst and tragedy are good plot points. Can't wait for more.
Oh... favorite line: "He chuckled quietly, holding back a much more frightening bout of maniacal laughter." Brilliant... just brilliant.
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait... there's 16 chapters... happy day! Triple the joy!
Take that Sai! *Holds up fingers in the shape of an L in front of forehead while childishly sticking out tongue* Sasuke is so good at being romantic when he tries.
I worry about little Naruto. Is he not as happy with Sasuke?
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay... officially I am caught up and absolutely in love... sigh.
So, Sai didn't get hit by a bus, but carted off to jail is just a fun. Stupid Poopyhead.
Your author's note at the end had me a little worried, but I'm glad that you are going to finish. It really is a lovely story that I have re-read several times because of the humor and the fluffiness that is Naruto. He's adorable in this.
Until the next!
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to be annoying... but I just read the "three NEW chapters" written in big bold letters in your summary... *blushes* I am now, 'officially' an idiot.
person qwerty
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Triple update!
Awesome. I really love this story. I want to know what will happen if/when Sai tells everyone that he was hired! Great job!
update!
person lo
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. I am so happy for this massive update. Keep up the great work.
person lo
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never get bored reading this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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