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for The Chemicals Between Us

by SemeUke

schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"melktert" for you!!! (google it)

Now, no eating of kittens and UPDATE, like, today!!!!
person Grey
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm only up to chapter two but I like it so far. You don't often see the super-aggressive uke and the totally disinterested seme in this fandom so it'll be interesting to see how you get them anywhere - although I am wondering if it'll end up being KakuIru after all, since Sasuke *really* doesn't seem into Iruka. ^_^
person Grey
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter three, and Sasuke *does* like Iruka... maybe? He may be straight. Or looking for a father figure. But Iruka doing all the pushing is cute as anything. ^_^ I'm really enjoying this story so far - the dynamic is really interesting, and I have no clue how you're actually going to get this to an adult rating... Iruka will probably have to drug Sasuke and tie him down, but the fact that Sasuke keeps coming back gives me hope!
person Grey
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, chapter four and Iruka trying not to be easy is adorable, especially since he's all but put Sasuke in a headlock in every stage of this relationship. At least Sasuke finally touched Iruka of his own free will - life is good! I'm with Iruka on the no long term thing though, since this Sasuke seems like he doesn't have enough spare time to keep a hamster alive. ^_^
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, you know, I'm a sucker for pairings that you don't see too often. This fic is too cute.
person Grey
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah. Chapter five and the sex was indeed smokingly hot. And I just noticed that this is an RP, which explains the way that Sasuke seemed not to care at all and Iruka seemed totally enraptured and gives me hope that there are actually feelings on both sides. *very happy* Loved poor Iruka making the first move despite having decided not to and having no supplies in the house, and I love that Sasuke has heavy piercings and yet apparently has never had sex with someone who made noise. Hee. What a pair. ^_^
person Grey
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter six and I finally believe that Sasuke may like Iruka! Makes my day. *loves* On the other hand, all the women in this story are both mentally unbalanced and not particularly good friends, but that seems to happen a lot in yaoi. Poor Iruka for having his business spread around to everyone, but at least he should know who not to trust in the future. Sasuke, on the other hand, says nothing but still gets everything dragged out of him by the end, and also a knee in the groin, so maybe Iruka had the right idea. *grins*
person Grey
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter seven and the addition of a *kitten*, which was possibly the only thing missing from this story. Sasuke is really starting to grow on me now that he's talking a little more and has the freedom to tease Iruka all he wants, although I do wonder just how incompetent Neji is if he can't manage to look after things for more than an hour. Hopefully they'll get to see each other more while they're living together, eh? Tsunade and her baseball bat may be my favorite mental image ever. ^_^
person Tiffany
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter 7! I always look forward to your story!
person ChiyoChan
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Need more story! What's going to happen now? Is Neji going to realise?

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