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for Take my Hand

by SexyMomma

person KMac
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I like them, they're good together in your fic.

You should note though, that in Japanese culture, white is the color of death and mourning. A bride and groom most certainly would NOT wear white, it would be a bad omen. And while I agree that she would be wearing hairpins, those pins would not be chopsticks like the kind for eating, but different things.
person gaara89
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww! so cute! I do like this couple! keep up the good work.
person Dynamo
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i realy hope you continue this one, i love that gaara isnt a psycho, AND THEY ARE SOOO CUTE TOGETHER!
update soon? pretty please?
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Sooooo, the wedding night is next hmmm?
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eee^__^ after reading this chapters I like Gaara myself jeje. I swear, this is my first fic I've read that Gaara is a fine man; the other ones I've read involves a sex crazed homosexual rape phyco with an incest problem (Still read them though lol). Can't wait foe the next chapter.
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this lovely update. Good luck with your exams!!!!!
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully sweet.
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It feels a bit rushed but is still very still very sweet.
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, to be honest. Normally, I wouldn't like this pairing. I prefer Hinata/Naruto

But you did such a great writing with it, that it is beginning to awake my interest.

Very good writing and good flow of the story.

Please update soon, I'm eager to read more of this.
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! More! I love it.

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