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for Fiat justitia, ruatcaelum

by setsue

person ledfan
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg just read chp. 11 I nearly DIED of laughter at the real ninjas reference XDDDDDDDDD
person emp78
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love how you wrote the battle scene; so much better than I could have done.
person ninjakitty
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Naruto's last comment.

can't wait for the next chapter
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your interpretation of Shukaku. ^^
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha! This is the funniest, bestest chapter ever! And so becoming of the triumphant return of Naruto!! (And an out of character but quite enjoyable Gaara, too!)

Although, wouldn't Sakura know who Gaara was already? Its not like she would forget the face of the boy who almost killed her. (Still, love that crazy, full of life, Naruto-influenced Gaara!) hehehe. =^^=
person emp78
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so funny! Fishnet short shorts? Don't sound too comfortable; chafing, you know? A thong would be better, ne? Keep up the great writing!
person emp78
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neji is such a bastard in this! I like how Sakura is more aggressive, with a 'Don't fuck with me' type attitude. Keep up the good work!
person Miko66
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I think all the other reviews more or less cover my feeling for this fic.... its original, interesting and quite beautifully done.. I hope you continue the great work! Hmm....and maybe Itasaku? pretty pleaseeeee lol *just a hope*
person Midnight
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! Its awesome! I love your change of personalities... its original and captivating. One of the most fun fics i ever had the pleasure of reading. I really hope you continue it and keep up the great work. I just love the twist of dimensions here <3

Well I still hate Orochimaru lol. And i just adore Itachi, I mean I do in the canon, but your Itachi... I just want to glomp him lol... maybe a bit of Itasaku romance *wiggles eyebrow* ...haha well I can hope right? And Naruto and Zabuza interests me... Honestly you made a really lively, warped and fascination Naruto World... and you did it great! <3
person emp78
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Itachi sounds like Naruto when someone mentions "Ramen!"
You've changed all their personalities, and it really livens things up!
Keep up the good work and update soon!

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