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by hasu86

schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ever since I started reading your story I was gripped by the sensualityof it, but also of the breathtakingly vivid and clear description of what is undoubedly the dark and grim side of naruto. A side you describe so accurately it comes to life before your eyes. Please update as soon as possible as I am hooked by this story, and was so from the beginning
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Although I hope she will somehow be saved, I don`t think and it makes one feel so sad. A grippng chapter which makes you feel everybit of the suspense, hatred and pain that Sakura feels. reuly great work
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! Damn you for having such a kick ass cliffhanger!! (^o^) great job keep up the awesome work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person A.J.
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! I so didn't expect the final battle to come so quickly but dawn was it great! I really don't know what the next chapter will bring but I know it will be incredible!!
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting very addictive. lol Update soon!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Gives a standing novation* Not only are you a wonderful writer; but you have done the impossible twice...One: You actually got me to like Sakura! And I mean, really like her character enough to emphathize with her. I felt so bad for her in the beginning. I was angry when she got angry. And I was practically jumping up and down when she sparred with her former teammates. Two: I actually wanted to hit Naruto and Sasuke for being selfish jerks. Well, I often want to hit Sasuke in the majority of the stories I read but Naruto! LOL. Good job. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* oops. Meant ovation. Hmm. Anyway, I love this fic. I never thought I would ever stray from my Yaoi...This is a testment to your wonderful writing!
person Maya
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. You put such dept in every sentence, and use a fluid and colourful language. The plot is fantastic and you portray the characters wonderfully. You also use a great variety of words which makes the story richer.

Spectacular. (Do blush and fidget. You deserve to have a major ego-blow for this piece of art. :))
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say is




YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY! :)
person Haru
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that chapter was so good! It was almost worth the wait! Just kidding! I really love this fic, especially the way you wrote Kakashi and Sakura's friends but wanting to be something more but not wanting to ruin the friendship they already have relationship. I also really liked how you wrote Sakura herself, she feels very real and IC. And the sex scene was amazing! So good! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

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