rate_review Reviews

Wow i love how you tell the story and show everyones personality even when fighting. ^_^ good job.

Very nice setup! You're building a great foundation and you write the Naruto world very well. There's not even a hint of a pairing yet and I'm already intrigued. Even if it didn't come down to any sort of relationship, I would still continue with this story as it seems you have a good solid plot lined up.

OH! I got goosebumps! This is not only extremely interesting but VERY well written. The battle scenes were great, the dialogue pristine, nary a spelling error anywhere... I can't wait for more!

oh, this is good. I like a story with a plot. i also like the Kakashi/sakura thing. Good job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Rox

I love your writing style! and this fic seems promising. ok i'm about to give you a huge ass complement. i liked your OCs. and i normally hate OCs. they dont seem perfect like authors normally write OCs in as, which is a big deal because theres nothing sadder then a really good story with some perfect OC that makes the reader want to puke. ex. they are always beautiful, smart, talented and for some weird reason they always have a great singing voice. gah. makes me sick. and strong Sakura is always good. xoxoxox