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for Blackmail and Betrayal

by Zrina

schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jealousy is such an ugly emotion... I know! But, I want to grow up and be you... is that bad?
Awesome last few chapters. I don't know how I missed then, but I loved them! Your Kakashi is brilliant. Perfect in every way!
My favorite line, maybe ever...

"When you needed lube, I provided. When you needed privacy to molest your boyfriend, I was there to help."

Priceless... I'm going to laugh all day.
person DarkSin
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man i love all your fics! I keep telling my friend at work about them, lol she loves yaoi but doesn't get on the net much. Can't wait to read more. I LOVE YOU XD!! lol

P.S.
When are you putting up Dreams of Fire? TSOD is my favorite fic!
person qwerty
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
update
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Naruto.
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I saw Tommy Lee Jones the other day ^^

It was so weird! I was at a red lights, wondering when the hell the light was going to change, when a weird Jeep-ish car turned my way. I could see him in the driver side, and I watched him drive away like a dumb ass with my mouth hanging open ^^

At first I was like, "What a minute... was that-?" I looked back again even through I couldn't see his face, but it was still fresh in my memory. Then I was like, "OMFG, that was him! ^^....wow."

Then the car honked behind me and I realize that the light had already turned green.

...ok. I'm done with that story. But I absolutely love yours! ^^ I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Allys
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn sugar. This is getting seriously deep into the crime drama aspect today. And I Love it. You rock!! Is ther anything you can't write??? I mean you have drama, comedy, romance, suspense... That fucking awesomely odd chapter in SoD gives me a Thriller/Horror aspect. You cover all genres, and you do them all Damn well. Congratulations, you more than officially Rock. You have sanctioned the Rocking!! Oh amazingly awesome you, LOL.*glompg* Kakashi is such a bastard *snicker*. I loved the miniature orange dildo, I want a chibi orange dildo!!! I can't wait to see where you go from here XD, *huggles the crap out of the you* MUAH!!! Thanks for the update Love!! ♥
person Davey Lockhart
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story.
person Raina
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw poor Naruto and Ino. He's all battered and bruised physically and she is battered and bruised mentally. :( It's so cute that Naruto is so protective and he disregards his own injuries to be at Ino's side. It sucks that he is unable to see Sasuke, but knowing them I am sure they will be able to work something out. I really hope that the FBI can keep everyone safe.

Well there was no evil cliffy this time but now I am so... I can't think of the word. Now I have no idea where this is going, it's so hard for me to predict anything. I like that. :)

I look forward to your next update.
person Kimra
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D
person Halskr
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your style of writing. The story is very compelling. It is a nice twist. Thanks for the update.

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