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by Hellagoddess

schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tata, i'm off to buy some orange panties as well. lol. nice story. borderline crackish but still plausible. very funny and entertaining. and i think you handled the characters very well; they were all IC, esp naruto. but i don't neccessarily think you need to add to this story though, it works fine as a one-shot; answers all its own questions and leaves the reader satisfied. I'll be looking forward to any future stories you do. ;-)
person Sama
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! What I thought about it? Frigging hot thats what!!! OMG! I hope to see another post from you in the near future but if not I'm happy with this!! ^^ Please keep up the great work! Ttul!
person Zrina
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg, love the prank that Naruto pulled on Kiba... that was freaking hilarious.

Loved the whole thing... it was hot and sexy!!

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