rate_review Reviews

That was great! I look forward to more!!

I shall sum up my enjoyment of this story in one word omgthatwaswonderfulIthinkIloveyou! *cough*

Seriously though, this was a great story. Something I can see happening.(I know it'll never happen but I can wish) You got the charactors down perfect. If you decide to write other stories along this theme I will no doubt shower them with praise as well.

(P.S. I feel bad for Karin but I'd have done the same thing to her too.)

Wow. THis is the first Hebi story I think posted on here! :)

This was pretty good. You got a great handle on the characters. Sasuke sure is an evil fuck. Obtaining Naruto through his emotional weaknesses would gain him not only a strong ali, but the perfect bait to draw out his brother. Too bad its probably not going to work. Mwhahahhaaaaa.

Great story.

smexy!!... will there be a sequel??.. maybe from Naruto's pov???

wow i really liked that story, seems alittle like something that sasuke might actaully do lol doubt the writers would add that though :P, but the characters seem in character very well, if u do continue this i'll definatley read but even if not it was a very good oneshot :P

Damn, this was a one-shot? I was gonna say please continue!! OMG I LOVE THIS! That was just a totally awesome, yummy one-shot! I give it two thumbs up and more! Keep up the great!! Can't wait until I see your next update! Ttus! Bye byes!