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by hatochan

person cynaga
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes~! Sometimes words are more intimate than sex. So nicely written!
person llyoung
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved everything but especially the conversation regarding Kiba and his clan's abilities.
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhh this getting good. even though it sounds like iruka is a little slutty, i think it was just his way of trying to find the right one!! man i love this fic and the pic goes so well with the story!!!!! uhhh man i wish i could be a s good as you. your awesome, please update soon!!!!
person cynaga
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still love this one. Especially with the words from 'Closer' blended in.
person emp78
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Iruka is sooooo sexy! I can't wait to see when Kakashi IS ready for it! LOL. More!!!
person Tiffany
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your story sooooooooo much! Its just too HOT!!!!!!!!! Iruka seems like a little naughty slut!
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, I hate being an evil nazi editor, but prostrate means to be lying prone on some surface while prostate is the term for the accessory sex gland. Anywho, I love your writing so much I can't tell you! Tolerant is one of my favorite favorites, and that you continue to write in that arc pleases me to no end. Great job with everything!
person llyoung
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Because he isn't ready for it". I loved it. Great job. Looking forward to the next.
person Anise
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honestly who doesn't just love Genma, well okay maybe Kakashi isn't thrilled with him for yelling that out, but besides him :)
And Iruka and Kiba, so hot (and a little disturbing) I wonder how many of the kids had crushes on their sensei, probably more than a couple-who could blame them!
What a little slut you made Iruka out to be although in true Iruka style, all of them ending as friends. And Kakashi not having bottomed yet because he's not ready (according to Iruka), it makes sense though Kakashi would have to be willing to give up a little for that to happen, although this is Iruka how could he not want to change it up with him! I sense something happening at a later time, or maybe that's just me hoping ;)
Just yesterday I went to your journal (your girl is beautiful) to see if you had put something there about how your writing was going and here we are today with a new chapter and a fun one at that, it was perfect timing!

person rosie
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the plot. the song ive heard is a good choice.

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