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July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"uh, is that ribbon for me?"
That line had me laughing! Thanks for not ending on the Beloved part!
That line had me laughing! Thanks for not ending on the Beloved part!
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg i loved the ending i cant wait for next chapter :D very good i loved the whole thing!
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an AWESOME chapter!! Please keep going, I can't wait to see Iruka's answers.
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*it's a good thing you didn't end it where you did, one too many cliffhangers makes for mutinous fangirls-although I did realize that you couldn't kill him off otherwise how would we find out about Iruka's past, see I'm becoming immune to your endings :)
*mini Iruka tackling Kakashi and kissing him, cutest image ever! the thought of them passing in and out of each others lives until they finally got together for good is a wonderful idea. I have to admit that at first I thought Kakashi made that up as a joke to make Iruka smile but I like the idea of the Uminos and Hatakes having known each other, it makes me wonder what their lives would have been like if their parents hadn't kept dieing on them.
*finally Jomei, could I just say how much I loved that, I thought it was a perfect relationship for a young Kakashi. I wonder if Jomei knew that he was the one thing in Kakashi's life that had nothing to do with death and being a ninja and that's why he didn't say anything to Kakashi. There was nothing that could be done about it anyway so by not telling Kakashi they could just enjoy being happy and together without him just being one more person Kakashi needs to worry about losing, sort of 'every moment is too precious to waste time on what could happen, let's enjoy each other while we can.' (although he really should have told him)
*must stop spending so much time analizing fanfiction, seriously who thinks about fictional characters this much I think there's something wrong with us, not that I want to change mind you ;) another wonderful chapter and now I'm even more excited about Iruka's past his is going to even more interesting!
*mini Iruka tackling Kakashi and kissing him, cutest image ever! the thought of them passing in and out of each others lives until they finally got together for good is a wonderful idea. I have to admit that at first I thought Kakashi made that up as a joke to make Iruka smile but I like the idea of the Uminos and Hatakes having known each other, it makes me wonder what their lives would have been like if their parents hadn't kept dieing on them.
*finally Jomei, could I just say how much I loved that, I thought it was a perfect relationship for a young Kakashi. I wonder if Jomei knew that he was the one thing in Kakashi's life that had nothing to do with death and being a ninja and that's why he didn't say anything to Kakashi. There was nothing that could be done about it anyway so by not telling Kakashi they could just enjoy being happy and together without him just being one more person Kakashi needs to worry about losing, sort of 'every moment is too precious to waste time on what could happen, let's enjoy each other while we can.' (although he really should have told him)
*must stop spending so much time analizing fanfiction, seriously who thinks about fictional characters this much I think there's something wrong with us, not that I want to change mind you ;) another wonderful chapter and now I'm even more excited about Iruka's past his is going to even more interesting!
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 2;
you my dear are amzing. i love this stoy. i will never look at iruka the same again, and i don't think i would want to. Iruka must be good in the sack with all that experience. I really am looking forward to reading this fanfiction. I mean it seems to me that it will give what the others were missing instead of dishing out random bits of greatness you will be giving us a course meal. either way. i love the dance and how kakashi is okay and then like jealous. it would be interesting to read another story with them acting similar. i don't think you understand how much i enjoy reading these, These are the best iruka and kakashi stories i have ever read.
you my dear are amzing. i love this stoy. i will never look at iruka the same again, and i don't think i would want to. Iruka must be good in the sack with all that experience. I really am looking forward to reading this fanfiction. I mean it seems to me that it will give what the others were missing instead of dishing out random bits of greatness you will be giving us a course meal. either way. i love the dance and how kakashi is okay and then like jealous. it would be interesting to read another story with them acting similar. i don't think you understand how much i enjoy reading these, These are the best iruka and kakashi stories i have ever read.
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 3:
i feel at a loss. I mean what am i going to read now that i've finished what you have here. damn. well this was sweet. i feel a lot like kakashi wanting to know everything about iruka, you have me so curious. i think i forgot to mention in my last review how much i liked how genma talked. i think kakashi missed a lot when he was hidden away as an ANBU, like being in on iruka's exploits. So many people seem to know even Kiba knew of his reputation.
i feel at a loss. I mean what am i going to read now that i've finished what you have here. damn. well this was sweet. i feel a lot like kakashi wanting to know everything about iruka, you have me so curious. i think i forgot to mention in my last review how much i liked how genma talked. i think kakashi missed a lot when he was hidden away as an ANBU, like being in on iruka's exploits. So many people seem to know even Kiba knew of his reputation.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never thought anyone could be so indignant about not being uke. I could almost see him demanding Iruka top him, going on about how he was perfectly capable of bottoming and why haven't you pinned me to the bed and had your way with me yet! (pouting the entire time of course) It's going to be interesting to see how this all plays out and also why Iruka feels he isn't ready to top, I have some ideas on that myself but I'll wait and see ;)
It was a nice chapter from Iruka's confession, which was just too sweet for words, to Kakashi's thoughts! So next chapter we start to hear about their pasts, right? I hope so I can't wait to hear about them, especially Kakashi because I can't recall there being much about his past in any of your stories. As usual loving the story and always looking forward to more from you :)
It was a nice chapter from Iruka's confession, which was just too sweet for words, to Kakashi's thoughts! So next chapter we start to hear about their pasts, right? I hope so I can't wait to hear about them, especially Kakashi because I can't recall there being much about his past in any of your stories. As usual loving the story and always looking forward to more from you :)
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 1
i have only one word for you "salivate" this was so good. although now i have to read your other story you mentions in the beginning of this one...so good. and dirty and i just love it.
i have only one word for you "salivate" this was so good. although now i have to read your other story you mentions in the beginning of this one...so good. and dirty and i just love it.
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE Chapter 3!!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are soooo good. This is so intense. Can't wait for the rest. It's interesting that youve made Iruke so experienced, normally he's portrayd as an innocent virgin. It ads a whole new dynamic.