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by hatochan

person luxeflex
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated! ^^ you made my day, your kakairu fics are seriously the best
too bad there's only gonna be 1 chapter after this, I want more! ^^
person fyrbyrd
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh by the Gods, is that puddle on the floor me? Sweet dreams tonight, thank you!
person llyoung
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok. That made me cry (which isn't a very easy thing to do). Poor Iruka but at least he has Kakashi now.
person Anise
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* well I think that you've broken my heart, I knew he would lose her and it would be sad but I didn't think you would make him suffer so much, although like Kakashi's confession it was probably good that he finally talked and got it out :(
-as Iruka was talking about Hayate it was nice to see Kakashi start to have little realizations about why Jomei didn't say anything about his health problems. and just how cute were Hayate and Iruka, what a sweet relationship they seemed to have had, giving Hayate up showed a real strength in Iruka to be able to do that (hope that makes sense)
-I wish I could tell you that you surprised me with Genma being Iruka's first but in all honesty I've sort of thought that from the beginning it would just make sense, someone had to turn him into a sex god! ;) (spank me sensei just made me smile and giggle-other people in the room think I'm nuts!)
-one last thing would have to be Raidou and Iruka I love this pairing but absolutely no one writes it (makes me wish I could write), it's too bad because I think it would be totally hot. Rai's dubbed voice in the english version is just too sexy, as soon as I heard it I knew he'd be a favourite plus his scars aren't bad either! :)
it was another wonderful (if sad) chapter although now I think that I'm looking forward to the smex you promised at the end of the chapter it's summertime after all, perfect for frivolous and smexy!
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. I have no words after this. You do have a gift for going in unexpected directions coupled with an even rarer gift of creating emotional involvement in your readers. Thank you.
person Tiffany
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Chapter 5 was sooooooooooooooo SAD!!! I cried! It was a beautifully wriiten chapter! I love it! cant wait for more XD
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Waaahh poor Iruka!!! Thank god he has Kakashi! I can see how Kakashi regrets staring this question and answer dialogue. However, I hope he understands now that Iruka wasn't all about fast and free sex. Still loving the story though, please continue :)

We always need more good Kakashi x Iruka stories don't we? *smile*
person Sylvir
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG As I type this I am crying. Can't wait for the happyness and smut of the next chapter to make me feel better. Keep doing what your doing I love this story.
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFL That was a great chapter. I actually started tearing up on the Jomei part. And yes... I would have been very disappointed if it ended with him dying like that.
person Tiffany
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 was sooooooo good! This story is soooo awesome! I cant wait for more! XD

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