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for Unrequited

by tasukigirl

person sainaru
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
umm is this a gaa/naru story *gets on knees and prays that it is* if it is thank u for writing it im getting sick of all the sasu/naru story i also love gaa/naru stories because their perfect for each other they can understand each other's pain. btw can't wait to see how the story turns out so plz finish it.

oh *smacks naruto in the head* he better get over that ass sasuke soon and hook up with gaara like he should lol although im still loving ur story *gives cookie*
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww that was so cuuuute! I love it when Gaara and Kanky are all brotherly ^w^ I also believe Naru makes a good uke.... I've always seen him as an uke...... Gaara is more the seme type to me. But its fine with me what ever you choose =3 Nice story its cute.. of course all GaaNaru/NaruGaa stories are cute.
person KingCobra
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. The scene with Gaara and Kankuro was very nicely done, and I could see it happening like that.

Please update soon. I want to read more.
person MeLaiya
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw that was so sad and cute. This isnt just a one shot right? I mean there are gonna be more chapters right?
person Ana
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Naruto. *sniffs* my lovely Gaara. This is great um....this isn't a one-shot is it??? I hope not because I love this pairing and I feel that they dont get enough love. ^.~
~Ana~
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....................!!!!


I can not wait to see where this goes. ^^
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn its been such a long time since I reviewed on this site. ^_^ Anyway, Just wanted to say I loved the story. It was sad, & yet perfect at the same time. Plus it was beautifully well written. As for the parings?.......Well I'm a big SasuNaru & GaarNaru fan. So basically as long as you make Naruto the "uki", in the relationship, you can't go wrong. (Giggles). But here is some advice if you need/want some. If Gaara's Unrequited love in this story is Naruto?....Then the perfect plot for this story is a Gaara & naruto relationship. But if Gaara is in love with someone else? And you make that known in the story? Then the perfect plot for this story would be a Sasuke & Naruto relationship. If you fallow this, you can't go wrong. ^_^
Anyway loved your story and I can't wait for the update. So, hope to see you soon. Latter.
Kisses ^_~
person MysteriousStranger
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this just a one-shot or will you be continuing this? I really like it.
person blueinu
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plz continue with this story it has so much potential!

Plz keep it a naru/gaara story line,and keep up the good work!
I just hope there is more than a one-shot to this but if not, oh well!

thanks much
blueinu
person Rosebud
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start!
I hope you update soon!

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