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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So they both agree they want it to stop, which might be a good thing. Then they can both sort out what they want without being involved anymore. This story is actually really intense, reading how they both feel so strongly for each other, but don't want to. Great chapter!
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is one great fic. i love the drama and plot, poor sasuke he can't accept his love for naruto and it was making me so impatient for the eventual break down and fuck lol. plz sasunaru!!! naruto as uke is what i crave lol! you are a great author! update soon plz?
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wowzerz! That was one heck of a chapter, very well done. The plot is so cute and angsty, everything I look for in a fic.
Awe, poor Naruto waking up to the butt head Sasuke XD How confusing would that be?! So much drama...anyways, please keep up the wonderful work and amazingly short update periods <3
You Rock!
Awe, poor Naruto waking up to the butt head Sasuke XD How confusing would that be?! So much drama...anyways, please keep up the wonderful work and amazingly short update periods <3
You Rock!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, the story's getting heated!!
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!! I'm glad that Naruto was persistent and didn't let Sasuke drive him away. Naruto's stubbornness will come in handy to break down Sasuke's defenses. Love how you are writing this! :)
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January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter is intense and beautifully done... sexy, hot and rewarding...
my problem with it are the shifting verb tenses... sometimes I had to reread a paragraph to understand who was doing what or to whom because the verb tense was pointing somewhere else than the rest of the action... that was it. The action? beautiful... I liked it a lot. If you are able to smooth out the verb-tense problem it will be just perfect! ^.^
my problem with it are the shifting verb tenses... sometimes I had to reread a paragraph to understand who was doing what or to whom because the verb tense was pointing somewhere else than the rest of the action... that was it. The action? beautiful... I liked it a lot. If you are able to smooth out the verb-tense problem it will be just perfect! ^.^
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December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PEPPERONI AND GREEN PEPPERS, OLIVES, CHIVES.
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Sasuke is such an arse. He needs THERAPY. So, he thinks that Naruto is sleeping around with other dudes... Or perhaps he thinks that Naruto is not nearly as affected by their "break-up" as he is, and he himself is hurt. That makes sense cause Sasuke (being emotionally stunted and all) always lashed out rather than dealing with his problems in a more...human...way (y'know, rather than the typical physcotic and unnecessarily violent way. ^^ ). Anyway, I am very impressed with your fast updates. Please keep up the excellent work! Chuu
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Sasuke is such an arse. He needs THERAPY. So, he thinks that Naruto is sleeping around with other dudes... Or perhaps he thinks that Naruto is not nearly as affected by their "break-up" as he is, and he himself is hurt. That makes sense cause Sasuke (being emotionally stunted and all) always lashed out rather than dealing with his problems in a more...human...way (y'know, rather than the typical physcotic and unnecessarily violent way. ^^ ). Anyway, I am very impressed with your fast updates. Please keep up the excellent work! Chuu
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as the disaster continues. sasuke's an asshole. nuff said.
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! So good! You gotta write the next chapter & post it hun!
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December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. I like how Sakura came to Naruto's defense. I hope Sasuke finally gets some sense knocked in to him, and stops acting like such a jerk. lol Update again soon please. ~ Jelp