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by havenoclue

person Daga
schedule November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Quite nice story, first few chapters were the best. I like the idea except for few details. I know that multi-pairing is popular but I don't like when Konoha turns into gay-town. Other relationships were just mentioned and weren't significant (maybe except for shino/kiba) for the plot... it only made sasunaru less special and made the story less probable. The last chapter could be more dramatic, but I liked the epilogue.
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
UghI love it... really I just... Sasuke seaking redemption esspecialy in Naruto gets me EVERY time. :)
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ending!
person Lunsky
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such a great present for my birthday, thank you so much, you made my day :)
fyi: sorry grammar mistakes :p
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nice ending. I liked it. :)
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I lovvvvvved this!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ugh... I love it and I hate him... and I love that Kiba's in trouble. I don't know why but I am. And Sasuke better put the lead out fast to get to Naruto before its too late.
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: I read your author's note at the end of this chapter. That makes me so sad. My mother had cancer so I know what you are going through. I wish you luck there.

As for the chapter, I actually enjoyed seeing a different Kakashi pairing. I wouldn't have thought about pairing him up with Genma. And reading Icha Icha to Obito's gravestone, that is so Kakashi.

Moving on to chapter 9.
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: I wonder where Naruto is going. At least Sasuke is FINALLY seeing the light but is it too late? I certainly hope not. Update again as soon as you feel up to it and I'll be thinking about you. Good luck.
schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One really didn't catch me at first. I mean, I love Naruto x Sasuke but I really didn't get into the story until Chapter Two. Maybe I just needed a little background info first. Or it could be my growing boredom with Naruto x Sasuke. Too much of a good thing. (I've been reading mostly NaruSasu for almost two years now.) After Chapter 2, I'm completely hooked so now I'm moving on to Chapter 3.

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