rate_review Reviews

I come back to this piece repeatedly over the years. It's just such a nice, intense story. Love it!

Mmmm, deliciously written! This isn't one of my favorite pairings, but I just love the way you portray them. You have a gift for choosing great descriptive words that evoke just what you're talking about.
I sort of wished I knew what the other party-goers thought of Shino and Kiba's total disappearance, and then Kiba's reappearance with him wearing a pair of Shino's pants. XD

Hawt and well written; nice job!

I think i forgot to breathe for most of it! <33! good!

these fics are one of the reasons i search through ENDLESS crap!

Yessssssssss >< Amazing. perfect. Wonderful. You capture them almost perfectly. (Perfectly would be kishimoto I guess, hahaa) Seriously though, good job. I wondered though, why were there so few people at Sakura's house? xD oh well.

I loveeeee this story. Great job! I hope you write more stories, because this was fantastic!

~PP

Awesome story!

I seriously thought I was going to meet my end at the hands of a killer nosebleed... That was so damn hot, I didn't know whether to stop reading it or go on! Kiba is so damn cute and Shino has the sexiest voice and he's so mysterious, you got them down to a science. This fic was PERFECTION. Absolutely beautiful. Say, are Shino's eyes really black?

OMG! THIS WAS INTENSE! IT WAS AWESOME! I NEED MORE! I DEMAND MORE XD! When I wasn't metaphorically pissing myself from laughing so goddamn hard, I was drooling. You write like it's a second skin, like you've been writing for years! I'm begging for a sequel! I'm begging for another story! I'm begging for ANYTHING! Please? *puppy eyes* PLEASE?! *puppy dog eyes AND cookies*. You're on my bookmark list but theres so much stuff that I can't check everyone often enough so my e-mail is h_oneybunz@hotmail.com. PLEASE EMAIL ME WHEN YOU POST SOMETHING! *begs pitifully*

Your newest devotee,
Ougon

Aw, that was a really sweet story. Great job! I really enjoyed reading it.