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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just a after thought. I would like to know what the council discusses about Paige after she leaves. Also, what is Shibi's thoughts about his son and Paige and the relationship that is between them. Thanks.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! The interplay with Scarab was humorous... I didn't see the Shino/Naruto/Kiba mission coming... and Danzo seems to be a fairly likely antagonistic force in the situation. Kudos for giving Anko and Kurenai some closure... and then giving us a somewhat snuggly Shino/Paige moment... can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read these 12 chapters in one go... I like this story a lot... your writing style is clean and easy to read, your characters are believable, as is the story... and as a fan/scholar of non-mainstream world religions, the information on Totemism is a huge bonus. Keep it up!
P.S. The pacing is fine, some of us read for stories, not just smut. The only bad pacing would be if you stopped updating it...
P.S. The pacing is fine, some of us read for stories, not just smut. The only bad pacing would be if you stopped updating it...
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ummm what can i say that isn't repeating myself yet again? short,yes but still very detailed and well written. one small typo where you put 'he' instead of 'she' but i can't for the life of me recall where..2nd or 3rd paragraaph i think? unfortunately i forgot to open this in a new window so yeah... beautiful,beautiful....i'm waiting on tender-hooks (what the hell does that mean?) for the council meeting :) keep it up, i've got my eye on you :P
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Short but definitely sweet. I loved how she handles ero-sennin. Hilarious!! Definitely a kick-ass kind of girl.
Making him work >.< probably the most he's done in years and it's paperwork!!! The enemy of all ninjas (particuarly the high-ranked ones)
Making him work >.< probably the most he's done in years and it's paperwork!!! The enemy of all ninjas (particuarly the high-ranked ones)
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am delighted to say that I have no idea where you are going with this. I LOVE THAT!!!! So Gaara is coming, yeay, I love him a lot to. Don't worry about Shino going off, absence makes the heart grow fonder. Thank you for the update, and really, there was no need to appologise, this was a desent length update.
Now, back to typing I'm waiting for the next update!!! (please)
Now, back to typing I'm waiting for the next update!!! (please)
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Gaara reference was the Tanuki info. And I love your story btw! I read it all last night and was really happy to see this chapter (12) up so soon! I can't wait for more!!! *eagerly awaits her cookie*
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“ 'This one…a tanuki…never heard of that before.' " ~GAARA!!! Heheh, I found it.
You have a very good fic going on here. Everytime you post a new chapter I find myself waiting rather impatiently for the next one to come along. Please keep up the great job. Until next time.
You have a very good fic going on here. Everytime you post a new chapter I find myself waiting rather impatiently for the next one to come along. Please keep up the great job. Until next time.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter! I can kinda see where is is headed. I can't wait to read more Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)