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It's nice to see Danzo finally get what was coming. Never liked Danzo... Paige and Shino's reactions to the council's decision were well played. And Shino's speech was awesome. Keep it up!

-Casa

I love this chapter (14)! It almost made me giddy when Shino spoke out for her! I can't wait for 15!! These are just getting better and better!

OOC? not really, I thought you worked extremely well with what Kishi established for Shino. Unfortunately, he is relegated to the supporting cast (but we love him just the same XD) I loved Paige giving them what for, I knew she was a kick ass kind of girl. On a side note, you really do work with schizophrenics, no wonder yo're so well informed but seriously, now that has got to be a potentially stressful job. Remember to take it easy 'kay. ^_^
I don't know if you know this but there's a theory doing the rounds at the narutofan forums about the Uchiha clans having connections with tengu, a kind of demon crow/raven. It was really well thought out, I just thought it was funny when I read your last chapter, hmmm. Personally, I find it interesting how different cultures tend to have corresponding points and symbols within their culture. (Of course, I don't mean very specific symbols, more in a general sense, like Crows, Ravens et al for harbringers of war and death. In Irish Mythology they serve the war goddess Morrigan and ame to the great hero cuchulainn when he finally died to show the people that the most feared man alive and supposed son of the god Lugh was dead.Of couse, there was more to it than that, I mean the morrigan dressed up and rode in a chariot to proposition the man in his younger years. He may have refused but she was always fond of him)
Woah, sidetracked *Blush* ahem , great story and nice work on Danzo,evil creature that he is (Okay, now I'm being biased ^^; )

Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)

Congratulations! You get a cookie! thanks for the review. Ch 2 should be up in the wee hours of the morning.


-CasaHouse

This was an awesome chapter. Your best one yet. Thanks for taking the time to update so fast.

I am so glad that you are having fun. That means you will keep on writing and that means I will get to read more of this wonderful tale. I like that you are using Danzo, it brings a new dimension to the story. Making the boys the ANBU for the story, no, I did not see that coming. Thank you again, I love this.

I had a faint idea that what Shino and them where doing but I was positive. Anyway this is a great chapter!! I can't to read more!! please hurry with the next chapter!! :)

XD that was great and now I'm all excited about the next chapter. Danzou.......So evil >.< I can't wait to see how you develop him. EEEEEEEEeevil!! ^_^ This just seems to get better and better.

this was another excelent chapter. As far as who saw through the naruto kiba and shino leaving i had a feeling that they would be involved in some way because they are some of the people who would protect her.

Anyways keep writing your oc fic that i normally wouldn't read but i am doing so

Kilrath Sluzath