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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
could you reply to my reviews at flameofevernight@aol.com?
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to mention that this is awesome ^_^; i love it and I hope you update soon!!!
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such cute adorable story. Love it.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo.
Interesting story, keep going. I hope you update soon enough :)
ps: if you're "scared" to write smut, just read some stories and you get the idea... its not that hard :D
see ya
faith
Interesting story, keep going. I hope you update soon enough :)
ps: if you're "scared" to write smut, just read some stories and you get the idea... its not that hard :D
see ya
faith
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
teehee, oh sasuke, kakashi IS right, you know, you DO need to get laid, you just have to get the right KIND of laid (believ it ^.^) Naruto, no no, the damage is done, the only way "the dagger" will listen to you is to find an Uchiha and sink it in, besides, remember the wonderful ancient wisdom here: Confuscious says, the dagger always knows whats best.
oh kiba, your too soft. I would have made naruto suffer more before telling him, even if it WAS a mutually benifitial situation, everyone wins here, Kiba doesnt have to drag the drunk uchiha home, sasuke gets to vent, then shut up and take kakshi's advice (wishful thinking much?) and naruto, well naruto owes him a bajillion times over now.
but still, i can't wait for a drunk sasuke to embarras the fuck out of himself ^.^
p.s. you update like woah, keep up the good work, you're helping to make finals season THAT MUCH more bearable
oh kiba, your too soft. I would have made naruto suffer more before telling him, even if it WAS a mutually benifitial situation, everyone wins here, Kiba doesnt have to drag the drunk uchiha home, sasuke gets to vent, then shut up and take kakshi's advice (wishful thinking much?) and naruto, well naruto owes him a bajillion times over now.
but still, i can't wait for a drunk sasuke to embarras the fuck out of himself ^.^
p.s. you update like woah, keep up the good work, you're helping to make finals season THAT MUCH more bearable
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If it wasn't for date rape I would never get layed?
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...there are only four chapters. Why are there only four chapters! I demand explanations!
Anyway the story is very good. Love the way you've written Gaara. Are you considering pairing him with anyone? Might I suggest Neji?
After all, you've already established he's gay, and even though he hasn't really made an official entrance, you already have the
perfect way for the two of them to meet. Have Neji go over to Kiba's (he doesn't like him so he can be in all protective mode)and have
them meet there. Might even have Gaara be the only one there. Anyway, just a suggestion.
Please don't have Sasuke and Naruto start liking (ie:going out, having sex)Sasuke is a tight ass he doesn't seem like he'd be the type
to give it up easily.
Thank you for not having crazy grammatical errors. I look forward to your next update.
~The Flame Reviews~
Anyway the story is very good. Love the way you've written Gaara. Are you considering pairing him with anyone? Might I suggest Neji?
After all, you've already established he's gay, and even though he hasn't really made an official entrance, you already have the
perfect way for the two of them to meet. Have Neji go over to Kiba's (he doesn't like him so he can be in all protective mode)and have
them meet there. Might even have Gaara be the only one there. Anyway, just a suggestion.
Please don't have Sasuke and Naruto start liking (ie:going out, having sex)Sasuke is a tight ass he doesn't seem like he'd be the type
to give it up easily.
Thank you for not having crazy grammatical errors. I look forward to your next update.
~The Flame Reviews~
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Adiii, I love how this chapter turns out. Although, I was kinda expecting naruto to show up and sweep our resident uke-in-denial off his feet XD, I didn't expect Kiba to be teh bartender. I WANT SMUT! Okay, to the point. And I know you can write a decent one since 1) you're a pervert, so am I, and we both are proud of it *grins* 2) so far, you've managed to keep them both IC even with the jokes thrown here and there. And I asolutely love your Gaara.
However, can readers have Itachi? Just for the sake of torturing poor Sasuke :3 you know either he's molesting Naruto until Sasu-chan gets jealous or he can 'peep' at them while NaruSasu is in session. But he's not homicidal enough. Or perhaps, next chapters should have an orange wearing Sasuke? Because he pukes his gut out on his shirt and there's no other shirt in Naruto's wardrobe. Can you imagine what the situation can cause the next day??? XDXD Okay okay, I'll stop here but I'll try keep on reviewing. Love, and take care *hugs*
~ m a y ~
However, can readers have Itachi? Just for the sake of torturing poor Sasuke :3 you know either he's molesting Naruto until Sasu-chan gets jealous or he can 'peep' at them while NaruSasu is in session. But he's not homicidal enough. Or perhaps, next chapters should have an orange wearing Sasuke? Because he pukes his gut out on his shirt and there's no other shirt in Naruto's wardrobe. Can you imagine what the situation can cause the next day??? XDXD Okay okay, I'll stop here but I'll try keep on reviewing. Love, and take care *hugs*
~ m a y ~
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Hooray for long chapters XD. I really Love this story, it never fails to make me grin like an idiot XD. I'm so excited about Naruto going to get Sasuke. And I adore how you make these guys interact. Gaara, Naruto and the Falling thing, LOL. And OMG... LMAO, Neji and Kiba XD, that was fantastic. I'm so happy you updated. And HOORAY for SMUT!! LOL XD. I'm really bad at plot points so I'll spare you :D. I think you're doing marvelously, I totally :heart: you.