rate_review Reviews

Daaaaaamn that was fucking searingly HOT!! I think I need to bathe in a snow bank after reading that.

Thought I'd give this a review as well, seeing as it is currently only found here. I like it. While the lack of audible chanting and omnious music does give it less of an atmosphere than the Bible Black series, I feel you've done very well with only words available to you. I also liked your explanation for why the "deed" had to be done. While demons might not be evil, in absolute terms, they are by no means good and pure, and carnal defilement seems just on par with what they do. It doesn't entirely fit in with the continuation of your series, as it seems to achieve much of the same as the following chapter of the original story does, namely creating the bond between Miko and Anko, but as an alternate arc it is a shining work of smut, in entirely positive terms.

Definatly bible black like and even thou it was really really good I stile like the original verson better.
please keep up the great work