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for Peaceful Waters

by Jayderaven

person Pomona
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! ^_^ As always I'm totally happy after you uploaded new chapter :) And if the next one is going to be lighter and more witty -the happier I am.
And one thing more: my favourite Naruto fandom website says Kakashi was 27 in the first series, so now in Shippuuden he's about 30... o_O He definitely doesn't look so, but that's what I read.
I hope it will help you sort out some age-things :)
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi I've been reading this story for awhile and I really enjoy it when you update! The ages confuses me also sometimes mostly how everyone thinks naruto is 12 and I'm not sure what his age is but I remember it being said that he failed the graduation test a couple times so wouldn't he be closer to 13 or 14? oh well I don't know and I don't really care I can't wait till your next chapter and I'm glad it seems like Sasuke is taking his head out of his butt
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, deeper down he rabbit hole we go, can't wait!
person roxnroll
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I've really missed this fic. I'm glad you got a new laptop. Can't wait to read the update.
Rox
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far so pgood! as far as the age thing goes, ur close! Kakashi is 26 when Naruto is 12 and in the shippuuden he is now almost 29, so u weren't that off! I have a link here that I am sending you, its the character bios, so if u have any questions about any or the characters in the story you can use this! cant wait to read more!

EF


http://www.leafninja.com/biographies-H.php
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ive waited a long time for an updated and wasnt left disappointed. This was a great chappy. To help you with the ages, in the beginning of the naruto series, Kakashi was actually 26-27. I hope that helps you work out age stuff for your story.
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, I do so love this story, despite myself. Isn't it funny how long stories can get when you meant to keep them short? Its like they write themselves. But I love this pairing, and I'm growing fond of the lovely little harem Sakura managed, there. I agree with whoever said it, though- MOAR NEJI. But I'm biased. I'll look forward to reading more!
person pokey
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please, feel free to bash Sasuke anytime. Personally, I can't stand him.
but anyway, great story! I love your characterization of Genma, it manages to capture exactly what I think he must be like (let's be honest, there isn't nearly enough of him in the manga) and still throws in a few surprises.
looking forward to the next update.
oh, and Sai is very funny. good job w/ everything.
if you still need a beta, I'd like to volunteer. just email me the chapter, I'll correct the spelling and point out things that may not make sense, then email my version back to you.
Ta!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy ***king sh*t! This just keeps getting deeper and deeper! You really know how to lay it on thickly, don'cha? I need to be truthful to you, at first, I kept passing over this story because I thought I wouldn't like it, now, all I want to do is cry because I have to wait for the next chapter! Totally awesome, you rock on so many levels that are unknown to me. Keep it going!
person Pomona
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woohooo! Yeah, I love it when you upload new chapters ^__^
And this is one good piece of work, that 10th one, but somehow...The last line, it sounded slightly like a soap opera- not totally wrong, just.. you know.

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