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by TheSirens

person Lucia
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiyas!!!!
Gods! I absolutely LOVE this story!!^__________________________________^
Ren is such an adorable character, and Sasuke makes a FANTASTIC father! I can REALLY imagine him acting like that xD All overprotective... can't wait to see more of that side of Sasu-chan ^.^
And the rivalery between Ren and Naruto always puts a smile on my face ^_____^ PLEASE!!! put more of those in latter chapies ;D And more fluffyness nya!!!!!! ^w^ [For both parties, 'cause we love the two trouble makers]
Can't wait for next chapter; Wonder what Orochimaru and Akatsuki have planned... and of course, can't wait to see Itachi and Kisame again ne? =D
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!!!
BTW, I'm also quite curious about that Story Ren was telling Sakura... may be we can see the full version in the future ne? ;D
Ja!!!!
person Tiffany
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Awesome Awesome story!!!
person Dragon7
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think your story was very cute. It was a good read!
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe.. Ren and Naruto arguing together are priceless. ^^
person crystal
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good job so far! And it's very well written too, with few mistakes. Going to be looking forward to more NaruSasu~!
person dragondancer
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm really enjoying this story. here's to hopeing for updates every week
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, Sasuke is going to find out that it was best for him to stay in Konoha. I wonder if Itachi and Kisame will also want to get Naruto when they come for Ren.
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Weeee! Lol, I get fanservice and a shout out! *glomps and huggles* aww, thankies ^^

Great chapter! The battles are interesting and I can't wait to see how the dynamic between Sasuke/Ren/Naruto turns out. It's cute that sasuke has a daughter figure and she was so kickass evil!! (well, the inu in her anyway ^^) I think Naruto can relate to her in some way :) Yay, keep up the good work!
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm glad that Sasuke finally stepped in to stop Ren from hurting Naruto. Then he went against Orochimaru finally to save his daughter. I just hope Naruto snaps out of the daze he's been in! :)

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