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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I cant wait for the next chapter! Its really getting exciting now! Um....too bad about the mans broken neck....LOL
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED!!!!!!!
"So asshole is it on the front or the back of your man thong" chap 4
“Uchiha-san enjoys being bottom.” Sai continued lying flawlessly. Chap 9
This two lines make my night I laugh so much it was great.
one thing this is a sasunarusaku right or is Sai going to be involve (I love Sai ;) )because I never read a story involving him it would be great!!
Well hope to read more soon :)
"So asshole is it on the front or the back of your man thong" chap 4
“Uchiha-san enjoys being bottom.” Sai continued lying flawlessly. Chap 9
This two lines make my night I laugh so much it was great.
one thing this is a sasunarusaku right or is Sai going to be involve (I love Sai ;) )because I never read a story involving him it would be great!!
Well hope to read more soon :)
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, I love this fic. I have absolutely no idea who Sakura will end up with. good job.
Rox
Rox
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that whole part sai telling the bartender sasuke wanted into that guy's pants was hilarious...as always awesome job keep up the good work and update soon ;)
ps when sasuke finds out about what sakura asked naruto i hope she wont go back on her word she should just include sasuke into her plans XD
ps when sasuke finds out about what sakura asked naruto i hope she wont go back on her word she should just include sasuke into her plans XD
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see Kakashi's reaction to Sakura's statement.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just finished the attempted date rape scene. I got a big sigh of relief. I hope Sakura ends with Naruto.
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey me again. Seriously!!!! Don't let Sakura get raped!!!! Or die for that matter!!!! Search your soul please!!!! I'm practically like Naruto right breaking in two. I'm on my knees in front of my computer!!! ;_; If not can you at least have sakura admit love to Naruto, even though she is gonna sleep with him. Like have them be more than best friends? ;_;
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
;_; I hate rape and can't stad Sakura wlkaing to her own death!!!!!! Please!!!!!
Email me, extreme_reborn@yahoo.com
Email me, extreme_reborn@yahoo.com
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that was me. (forgot to put name)^
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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking your fic, there are very few decent fics on this site, I'm sure the number will grow though it's like that with all "new" anime, look at the Inu Yasha section it has loads of great fics. Now i really hope this will be a sakuraXsasuke fic, because i want to see her turn him down and how Sasuke takes it and i REALLY want sasuke to find out that Sakura asked Naruto to sleep with her and NOT him, i want to see the ass get his due, before Sakura lets up on him. You have a few errors that are (in my opinion) negligible, heck i make loads of mistakes while writing as well. The reason why i think Kakashi and Sakura won't be so good together in this fic is cuz thus far the way the fic is developing it would make it seem rushed , because lets be honest any good fic with Kakashi and Sakura, needs to be developed very carefully, I'm not saying that your isn't it's just that, if it was meant to be kakashi and Sakura it would have been a bit different then it is. Hence why I think Sakura and sasuke would be great, because sakura seems not to be interested in Naruto. And i really want to see the drama play out between Sasuke and his team mates. Maybe a fight between Sasuke and Kakashi is in order as well? Oki i prattled for long enough, great fic, keep it up!