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for Look At Me

by bkdragone

person ceri
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter a lot, it added something to it, gave the readers a hint of what Kakashi might be feeling towards his pink-haired ex-student. As to the pairing question, why just pick one? wink, wink, nudge, nudge. But if I seriously had to choose it'd be NaruSasuSaku, and not neccessarily in that order. Keep up the good work, can't wait for what you write next!
~Ceri
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was funny. Kakashi was in on it too. I loved how he lightly threatened Sai. So is this a Sakura Sai story? Looking forward to the next chappy.
person chica
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i personally want to see sakura with kakashi
its my favorite pairing.
oh yea and good job so far its really good!^.^
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this fic had me laughing! I can't wait for more, as far as the pairings I like Sakura with all of them, so I can't really help there - LOL. Anyway, keep writing you're doing an excellent job!!
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, great idea and I love all their personalities, please continue soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks so much for writing this.
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Sai! And Sasuke is such a hottie....*drool*...but cant wait for Kakashi to enter. The sexiest man in the world of fanfics!!!
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My my this is going to be interesting.. I like what you have sofar, can't wait till you update again :)
person Mageblood
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely hilarious, I can’t wait for more to come!!!!
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this looks to have lots of Sakura x 'one of her sexy boys' promise (or lots of them XD)^^ THank you, thank you! I cannot wait till the next chapter, because you have my interest piqued.
person mel
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that you've made a great start. I saw very few errors and your writing style is easy to understand. Please update soon. I would love to see where this story goes.

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