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by Hestia

person kiNkyB
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for insperation on what some of naruto's creations would look like perhaps...
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person morbiDreamscape
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, *lol* Gaara makes me laugh so hard... XDD Please, please, more Iruka and Kakashi goodness. They are the HAWT. Hmm... and Shikamaru definitely needs more love. ^____^
person llyoung
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I've changed my mind. This Neji doesn't deserve Shika. Please put Shika with someone else.

person Anon
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH! i love it. you write BDSM so well. you know what your talking about thats so refreshing! if you stop writting ill cry becuase i love this!
person Allys
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you've updated :begging: Please, please, tell me that when I click the review button and click back there'll be a new chapter, because if there isn't - I need to make a phone call, to get this problem you've created, fixed XD. LOL. Oh the power of words XD.

The little escapade in the dressing room was awesome, Naruto strung up on the wall like that takes me right back to 9½ Weeks - The day I found that book while snooping in the back of my dad's closet changed my life. Oh my... XD. I also adored the spectacle they were making of themselves in the store, Naruto is so unsubtle that's it's painful, but painfully liberating.

The way that you've characterized Sasuke - Spot on. He's such a repressed being, so focused to the exclusion of all else, all the finer points of life. I also love how he jumped right to Naruto's defense - Kawaii so da XD. And your Naruto - He's so not slick, but soo smexy at the same time - I don't think I'm ever going to get over that -

But honestly the best part of your fics, is the inside of their heads when they get all geared up - fully half of all things sexual is mental, and you have a wonderful grasp on that.

Okay, I think I'm ready to click that back button now XD.

Glomps and luffles,
Allys.
person honeysuckelvine
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE I WANT MOR OF THIS AMAISING FIC!!!!!!!!!!! Moving, inspiering, and empowering! I am on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
person karin
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaahhhhh!!! no fair *pout* i thought you had a new chapter posted.
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think if Itachi subs it should be for Kisame. Since he does not think Kisame is into the scene - he should end up somehow subbing for him - unwillingly of course.

I like where you took this with Gaara.
Keep it up!!
person Kimmu
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am definitely intrigued by the Kisame/Itachi in this fic, it's really what's sparking my interest and I hopehopehope you keep up with it. Kisame is <3 and I love the cat and mouse game they are playing. (Totally hope Kisame wins ^o^)
person Pic's Pixie
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is it ibiki since even in the anime he's a torture expert hehe so that makes sense, can't wait for the next chapter, glad ur not waiting till thursday :P, though i wish there had been more sasu/naru but i can wait hehe keep up the great work :)

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